Not sure if it's just the camera, but the soldering doesn't look first class, there miiight be a few half arsed joints.
You really need to get to work on your photography setup! Were you shooting with a tripod, or was it all handheld?
I think the thumbnails could be just a little bigger on the webpage in order to not waste any space, and I'd think about having just a couple of key photos enlarged to help break up the pacing of the article. There's no spacing in between the thumbnails, which makes it look a little messy because of the inconsistent backgrounds, it kind of clashes.
edit:
I just clicked on the thumbnails.
So not only do they not enlarge properly, but you're still hotlinking to head-fi and using up their bandwidth for your personal site. Yes, you own the photos, but no, you can't hotlink to them!