Oski
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Interests: Table tennis (silver medalist [what event?] twice) classical music, audiophile.
Computer Skills: Windows, Mac OS, MS Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Access, Superform
Languages: Mandarin, Taiwanese, and French
Some of my changes in bold. You should do a spell check. There's no sense in putting English as one of the languages as you wouldn't want to put in doubt your ability to speak it. The rest are of course just additional language skills.
Otherwise quantify your accomplishments a bit more with dollars and numbers, similar to what you did here: "Part of team that generated $24M in tax credits for one of our clients"
What kind of job are you looking for? You would of course tailor your resume a bit to the job you want, this indicates a better match to the potential employer.
Originally Posted by Luvya Interests: Table Tennis, (silver medallist twice) classical music, headphones. Computer Skills: Windows, Mac OS, MS Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Access, Superform Languages: Mandarin, Taiwanese (Native), English (Fluent), and French (Good) |
Interests: Table tennis (silver medalist [what event?] twice) classical music, audiophile.
Computer Skills: Windows, Mac OS, MS Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Access, Superform
Languages: Mandarin, Taiwanese, and French
Some of my changes in bold. You should do a spell check. There's no sense in putting English as one of the languages as you wouldn't want to put in doubt your ability to speak it. The rest are of course just additional language skills.
Otherwise quantify your accomplishments a bit more with dollars and numbers, similar to what you did here: "Part of team that generated $24M in tax credits for one of our clients"
What kind of job are you looking for? You would of course tailor your resume a bit to the job you want, this indicates a better match to the potential employer.