Tim
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A few months ago I had an assignment from my english class to write a bussiness letter to a company of my choice and give them suggestions on how to better a product that I wasn't pleased with. Well, I wrote to Sony telling them that their portable CD players suck and how to fix them. I posted at this forum on this subject for suggestions on what I should say. ( see the original thread here , and many thanks for the suggestions. It helped a lot)
Sony responded to my letter in a most unexpected way (Actually, I never expected to hear from them). But first for your viewing pleasure here is the original letter I wrote and sent. And it's in official bussiness letter format, no less!
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[size=large]SONY CORP[/size]
Tim [excluded]
[address excluded]
7-35, Kingshgawa 6-chome, Shinagawa-ku, Tokyo 141, Japan.
Dear Sir or Madam:
Subject: Poor sound quality in portable CD players
Your recent line of portable CD players have declined in sound quality. Too much effort has been put into making the players thinner, with longer battery life. While these are good attributes of the portable CD player, you have neglected the quality of sound. The headphone and line outs are by far the largest problems with these players. They are not clean and crystal clear like they should be, and don’t have enough power to drive headphones properly. The headphone out should have at least 5mW per channel. Clarity is more important than volume. People searching for quality sound have been purchasing older Sony models such as, the D-25/D-25S (D-250), D-555 (D-Z555), D-303, and the D-777. All these models were released between 1989 and 1995. And some have only 1.5 hours of battery life with proprietary batteries that aren’t available anymore, but they all have excellent sound quality. This proves that people value quality of sound more than extended battery life and thinness. It also proves that quality in general has declined over the past few years.
Your portable CD players should also be made of stronger materials, like the classic D-25 (mentioned above), and the upcoming EJ2000 model both of which have full metal bodies. There’s no reason why your portable CD players can’t sound better. A company of Sony’s size and caliber can easily put more effort into making quality products. With a little more attention to detail and higher-quality components, anything is possible.
Sincerely,
Tim [excluded]
Concerned Customer
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You can see bits and pieces in this letter that I took from people's response to the original thread. (Again, many thanks)
And Sony's response which is on official Sony stationary, no less!
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January 17th, 2003
Tim [excluded]
[address excluded]
Dear Tim [this is getting redundent]:
Thank you for contacting Sony Japan. Your idea [Tim] eh hem, which was inspired by Head-Fi and headphiles alike[/Tim] was forwarded to Sony Electronics Inc. USA for resolution.
Please call me at [excluded] to discuss the situation you described in your letter. I am available Monday through Friday, 8:30 AM to 4:30 PM, ET. You may also leave a telephone number so I may call. Please reference your customer information number [excluded].
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
[Signature with real ink went here]
Darnely Spooner
Inernational Customer Realations Specialists
Office of the President
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Pretty cool, eh? Oh and just for the record, the reason I sent the letter to Japan was because I couldn't find any other address for Sony anywhere. And why not go directly to the source?
And now for the real point of this post: What do I say?
Could we use this opportunity to change the way we see Sony design their portable CD players? Well, maybe that is too extreme. What do you guys (and yes, the few ladies who frequent the forums) think?
Sony responded to my letter in a most unexpected way (Actually, I never expected to hear from them). But first for your viewing pleasure here is the original letter I wrote and sent. And it's in official bussiness letter format, no less!
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[size=large]SONY CORP[/size]
Tim [excluded]
[address excluded]
7-35, Kingshgawa 6-chome, Shinagawa-ku, Tokyo 141, Japan.
Dear Sir or Madam:
Subject: Poor sound quality in portable CD players
Your recent line of portable CD players have declined in sound quality. Too much effort has been put into making the players thinner, with longer battery life. While these are good attributes of the portable CD player, you have neglected the quality of sound. The headphone and line outs are by far the largest problems with these players. They are not clean and crystal clear like they should be, and don’t have enough power to drive headphones properly. The headphone out should have at least 5mW per channel. Clarity is more important than volume. People searching for quality sound have been purchasing older Sony models such as, the D-25/D-25S (D-250), D-555 (D-Z555), D-303, and the D-777. All these models were released between 1989 and 1995. And some have only 1.5 hours of battery life with proprietary batteries that aren’t available anymore, but they all have excellent sound quality. This proves that people value quality of sound more than extended battery life and thinness. It also proves that quality in general has declined over the past few years.
Your portable CD players should also be made of stronger materials, like the classic D-25 (mentioned above), and the upcoming EJ2000 model both of which have full metal bodies. There’s no reason why your portable CD players can’t sound better. A company of Sony’s size and caliber can easily put more effort into making quality products. With a little more attention to detail and higher-quality components, anything is possible.
Sincerely,
Tim [excluded]
Concerned Customer
**************************************************
You can see bits and pieces in this letter that I took from people's response to the original thread. (Again, many thanks)
And Sony's response which is on official Sony stationary, no less!
**************************************************
January 17th, 2003
Tim [excluded]
[address excluded]
Dear Tim [this is getting redundent]:
Thank you for contacting Sony Japan. Your idea [Tim] eh hem, which was inspired by Head-Fi and headphiles alike[/Tim] was forwarded to Sony Electronics Inc. USA for resolution.
Please call me at [excluded] to discuss the situation you described in your letter. I am available Monday through Friday, 8:30 AM to 4:30 PM, ET. You may also leave a telephone number so I may call. Please reference your customer information number [excluded].
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
[Signature with real ink went here]
Darnely Spooner
Inernational Customer Realations Specialists
Office of the President
**************************************************
Pretty cool, eh? Oh and just for the record, the reason I sent the letter to Japan was because I couldn't find any other address for Sony anywhere. And why not go directly to the source?
And now for the real point of this post: What do I say?
Could we use this opportunity to change the way we see Sony design their portable CD players? Well, maybe that is too extreme. What do you guys (and yes, the few ladies who frequent the forums) think?
