raptor84
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Some unsolicited comments =p
FIrst pic: I'm drawn to the upper left side (brighter) but was your intention to focus more on the people below? Maybe crop off the top using the bridge and sides as frames
Second pic is a nice play on lines but I'm just annoyed (personal pref) on how the tip of the edge is missing on the left
Third: Crop off the extra line on the right and great simple composition
FIrst pic: I'm drawn to the upper left side (brighter) but was your intention to focus more on the people below? Maybe crop off the top using the bridge and sides as frames
Second pic is a nice play on lines but I'm just annoyed (personal pref) on how the tip of the edge is missing on the left
Third: Crop off the extra line on the right and great simple composition