If you're a fan of The Farside you might like my webcomic
Oct 13, 2010 at 1:33 AM Thread Starter Post #1 of 25

Commanderloochy

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When I was little I was a big fan of The Farside and Calving and Hobbes, in fact I still am. A couple of months ago I acted on impulse and decided to start my own webcomic. Just wanted to share it with some fellow headfiers.

Check it out:
http://www.endlessorigami.blogspot.com/
 
Oct 13, 2010 at 8:53 PM Post #4 of 25
Try to keep an original drawing of each of your comic scripts, if you can.....You or your kids will enjoy them yrs from now!   Keep plugging away with your own brand!!
 
Oct 13, 2010 at 10:22 PM Post #6 of 25
I'm following you, keep up the good work!
 
Oct 14, 2010 at 1:24 AM Post #9 of 25
Just some criticism, don't take it the wrong way.
 
It looks professional, I couldn't tell if it was being done as a hobby or done in a paid for magazine.
 
Some of the material is intended for an adult audience, some of it seems ok for general audience, I feel the material is in a grey area on who the audience should be.
 
Definitely the audience that would get some of the jokes would have to be video gamers.
 
My favorite one was about the football video game.
 
That one reminds me of some of the stuff in American Splendor. Because it is from a true story. I think it could be more interesting if the jokes had more parts to it and developed into a short story.
 
Also, the drawings could be funnier if you spend more time making the pictures look like the actual people you know. To copy the American Splendor style.
 
I think it is a great idea and this site has potential if you can post more comics.
 
Oct 14, 2010 at 8:45 PM Post #13 of 25

 
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Just some criticism, don't take it the wrong way.
 
It looks professional, I couldn't tell if it was being done as a hobby or done in a paid for magazine.
 
Some of the material is intended for an adult audience, some of it seems ok for general audience, I feel the material is in a grey area on who the audience should be.
 
Definitely the audience that would get some of the jokes would have to be video gamers.
 
My favorite one was about the football video game.
 
That one reminds me of some of the stuff in American Splendor. Because it is from a true story. I think it could be more interesting if the jokes had more parts to it and developed into a short story.
 
Also, the drawings could be funnier if you spend more time making the pictures look like the actual people you know. To copy the American Splendor style.
 
I think it is a great idea and this site has potential if you can post more comics.



I really appreciate the criticism, most people don't the time to write such an in depth review. I'll definitely check out American Splendor, I will definitely be posting more comics. I'm posting a new one everyday
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Oct 14, 2010 at 9:57 PM Post #15 of 25
URW
 

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